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PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24
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0 posted 2004-03-28 01:14 AM



Grasp thy hand and walk with thee,
letting love guide our course,
(tho' it may draw us to uncertainty),
that to our love, time may endorse!

Allow time to make still this night,
so thine eyes may forever hold thy look,
that holds so precious this fairest sight,
and thine heart that love has over took.

Let upon these thirsting lips- a kiss,
for what may come of such affair;
that thy caress may produce love to this-
a virgin heart made proudly bare.

Yet time remains still, love shall not,
for love is waning that remains youthfull,
so farewell to such a loving thought;
a timeless love remaining truthful!

© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
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1 posted 2004-03-28 01:18 AM


A virgin heart made proudly bare -- what a great line!  Enjoyed.........jo
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-03-28 10:42 AM


A delightful poem!
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
3 posted 2004-03-29 03:02 PM


beautiful imagtry
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2004-03-30 06:12 PM


Enjoyed...James
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