Open Poetry #31 |
Love is Waning |
PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
Grasp thy hand and walk with thee, letting love guide our course, (tho' it may draw us to uncertainty), that to our love, time may endorse! Allow time to make still this night, so thine eyes may forever hold thy look, that holds so precious this fairest sight, and thine heart that love has over took. Let upon these thirsting lips- a kiss, for what may come of such affair; that thy caress may produce love to this- a virgin heart made proudly bare. Yet time remains still, love shall not, for love is waning that remains youthfull, so farewell to such a loving thought; a timeless love remaining truthful! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A virgin heart made proudly bare -- what a great line! Enjoyed.........jo |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A delightful poem! |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
beautiful imagtry |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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