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Open Poetry #31

Let Me Love You More

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2004-03-26 04:36 PM

Let me be the one for you
Let me be the one,
To love you
Believe me,
Trust me,
I will make you believe,
Iam only the for you,
So let me love you more,
Every day,
Let me teach you
To love me
Let me hold you
In my arms
Make you believe,
I will love you
Dearly,
Take my hand,
Touch me,
Make me believe,
How much you love me?
Let me love you more
Each day
Let me be the one
To love you,
Let me the one for you,
Let me be near,
To be with you
Let me love you more,
Hold me close to you,
Let me the one for you....

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-03-26 04:41 PM

A sincere, intimate poem. Enjoyed!

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-03-26 05:20 PM

I ask'd my women

She said

Why are you asking me

I'm a vision

I left

weeks ago

Dave

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2004-03-26 06:58 PM

Nice plea for love......Yearning well written!

Eric

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-03-26 07:00 PM

Well done Vandana...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace ~

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

5 posted 2004-03-26 07:44 PM

I, especially, liked your title. You have such warmth in your poem. I enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-03-27 04:14 AM

very romantic!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2004-03-30 06:16 PM

Nice and warm...James

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