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Tequilia_Sunrise
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0 posted 2004-03-28 01:01 AM



I thought I was in love,
You''re all I used to think of,
I''ll always remember you,
Even though we''re through.

I''ll never forget the times we had,
You were always there to make me glad,
We were the best of friends,
I never thought that it would end,
But I was wrong, it didn''t last long.

You were always there,
Everything with you, I could share,
But again I''m wrong, that didn''t last long.

I will always miss you,
and everything we used to do
But now I must move on,
This time, I''m not wrong.

I hope, one day we''ll meet again,
Forgive and forget, and be best friends,
I will always love you,
Paul I hope you feel this way too.

© Copyright 2004 Amanda Seymour - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-03-28 01:04 AM


Tequilla_Sunrise, sad but sweet -- thanks for sharing your love with us.  
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-03-28 10:49 AM


Life can be so hard sometimes. Great write!
MGROVES
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california
3 posted 2004-03-28 02:34 PM


ah so sweet and yet so sad enjoyed thanks for sharing  


passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-03-28 02:36 PM


very mature...I know this hurts, you're handling it well
Tequilia_Sunrise
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5 posted 2004-07-05 02:36 AM


thankx everyone for your lovely comments
cusick
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6 posted 2004-10-08 04:55 AM


Lost love, what a shame, you had so much in common. Maggie
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