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Another Regret to Add to the Pile
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Another Regret to Add to the Pile |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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I know it's not likely but do you regret what happened? Does it sadden you to not even know where we stand? Sometimes silence means goodbye So I bow my head bite back my tears once again and sigh that heartbroken sigh knowing that this time silence does mean goodbye there's a thousand places I'd like to be, but in your arms would be Heaven |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 the sadness speaks loudly here.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Skyfire Good write, enjoyed the read. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Beautiful read. I really enjoyed this one because it showed true emotion, like so many people here at Passions you write from the heart and thats what I like to see. ^*~Kimberley~*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
sadness yet so touching , I am often writting because I am left to wonder wondering about someones silence , in fact my recent one was about much the same subject , so I can relate Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes you just know whaat silence means  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* the pain of silence can be heartbreaking...Your poem brings one to tears.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Sometimes silence means goodbye" and sometimes goodbye means silence...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
heard that song, Rhonda |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sometimes those regrets aren't unmasked for years to come. Then it's "Sorry, Charlie--you had your chance!" I'm wishing you the best in these times. Sadelite |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow, thanks for all the replies ^_^ I haven't heard from him in weeks and the last time we had contact didn't end up well, sooo.... I'll live though. Thanks again! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
a sad poem with a cuteness to it , nice |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Silence can be so powerful....   ~skyHold on, if you feel like letting go |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Beautifully packed with emotions and truth Thank you ~P |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This is a sad wirte Sky....but you must know that you never live in silence at PIP...very good writing...if i may say so... Thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Rhonda, After considerable search I have concluded that you owe us a write. But I settled for this tonight because it is good!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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