Open Poetry #31 |
At The Movies |
dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
The young girls stand in line Each with one hip cocked out. Standing on their long, long legs Like exotic birds wading in shallow waters. Their red mouths flutter Like tropical butterflies After a long migration. They talk about their boobs and boys.. Which, when you think about it Is the same conversation Young men are having On the other side of the room. The guys amble over Like so many lean hounds Trying not to show the hunger in their eyes. [This message has been edited by dingusjr (03-28-2004 11:16 AM).] |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Another good one! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
hunting season at the movies eh? enjoyed this one too |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Keen observations, well written and giving us women insight! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey you..."man" - "many".... how you brought back to mind the sock hops... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sharp observations presented so well... I like this! *S* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You see so well! Loved this! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Girl watcher huh...at the movies, at the mall, at the beach...me too...like this...James |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ow, guilty as charged! I have been one of them dawgs...... Nicely caught, my friend -- I can absolutely see them! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Heh heh....enjoyed the images here! Hugs~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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