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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2004-03-27 04:56 PM



raw earth under rain

sunshine chasing clouds away

warm earth comes alive

      ©2004 by icebox

© Copyright 2004 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-03-27 05:21 PM


icebox,
In a nut shell, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-03-27 05:50 PM


Ah sweet spring!
You have captured this perfectly sir.
Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
   Has held me in the same embrace ~

Grover
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3 posted 2004-03-27 06:07 PM


Delightful!
Dark Angel
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4 posted 2004-03-27 06:17 PM


That about sums it up...wonderful images

enjoyed.

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Martie
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5 posted 2004-03-27 06:42 PM


icebox

Congratulations!  

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2004-03-27 07:27 PM


  


We've had the best rainstorms today.  On, off, on again...even pea size hail, and wonderfully LOUD thunder, and LOTS of lightning...

I'm dancing!

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
7 posted 2004-03-28 12:09 PM


could almost smell the damp earth, very nice
iliana
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8 posted 2004-03-28 01:38 AM


I liked the contrast -- pain with birth!
passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2004-03-28 03:55 AM


indeed!
Nan
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10 posted 2004-03-28 07:09 AM


Spring is definitely struggling to find its way around here... I enjoyed, icebox - as always...
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11 posted 2004-03-28 09:26 AM


Sometimes it's hard not to watch.....you know what is happening, have seen it before, and yet you must....look.

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Gaia
12 posted 2004-03-28 11:09 AM


*sigh*
it is snowing here this morning, so your poem may be my fantasy for the day

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13 posted 2004-03-28 06:58 PM


IceBox~
This is like inhaling a fresh breath ... refreshing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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