Open Poetry #31 |
Spring Rain |
Ludo Junior Member
since 2004-01-29
Posts 23 |
Spring Rain All I want is to dance with you, in the beautiful spring rain. Pretty watercolour paintings, show the scene that I long for. To be with you. Mist, softly stroking your face; my arms around you, yours in return, locked in a warm embrace. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very soft and touching write...enjoyed |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice write, enjoyed! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
romantic |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Nice, warm and romantic writing! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I enjoyed this loving write... ~K~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ludo~ Very tenderly lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ludo Junior Member
since 2004-01-29
Posts 23 |
thank you so much for your positive words. ) |
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