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choshi
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0 posted 2004-03-27 07:02 AM


I.

Spring emerges,
chickadees out my window;
snow-covered roofs.


II.

Brookside,
dripping with morning dew
iris's fullness.


III.

Drop-by-drop,
glistening on the lotus;
spring rain.


IV.

On the still river,
through the settled mist;
herons'whiteness.




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Kicking Kim
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1 posted 2004-03-27 07:23 AM


Wow, you have certainly taken note of what spring is like.  This really depicted the wonders of the weather!!

.:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':.

I really enjoyed this read!

.:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':.

^*-Kimberley-*^



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inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2004-03-27 07:55 AM


Spring emerges,
chickadees out my window;
snow-covered roofs.


spring by the window
winter on the roof
i wait,times moves

muted
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3 posted 2004-03-27 09:19 AM


so nice to read you again
Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-03-27 09:32 AM


Beautiful...so good to read you again.
Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
   Has held me in the same embrace ~

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2004-03-27 09:42 AM


choshi
Well done enjoyed.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-03-27 12:40 PM


fine enough for a series of greeting cards
iliana
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7 posted 2004-03-27 03:20 PM


choshi -- I love this series!  Exquisite and uplifting!     ......jo
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8 posted 2004-03-28 04:04 PM


snow on windowsill

still the morning springs anew

beams of light beckon


guess you can tell I enjoyed this inspiring set

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9 posted 2004-03-28 05:44 PM


Paul~
These are so genuinely lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

choshi
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10 posted 2004-03-31 09:47 AM


Thank you everyone for your encouragement, kindness and warmth.....    ~P
INclan
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11 posted 2004-04-01 04:10 PM


Well done...thanks for posting these.

INclan

Grover
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12 posted 2004-04-01 05:43 PM


Great excitement in such few words. Most excellent poetry!  
choshi
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13 posted 2004-04-02 12:48 PM


snow on windowsill
still the morning springs anew
beams of light beckon


guess you can tell I enjoyed this inspiring set.....   Oh yes, and I see you enjoy writing haiku as well... ~P

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