Open Poetry #31 |
Spring Emerges: [4 haiku] |
choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
I. Spring emerges, chickadees out my window; snow-covered roofs. II. Brookside, dripping with morning dew iris's fullness. III. Drop-by-drop, glistening on the lotus; spring rain. IV. On the still river, through the settled mist; herons'whiteness. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Wow, you have certainly taken note of what spring is like. This really depicted the wonders of the weather!! .:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':. I really enjoyed this read! .:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':. ^*-Kimberley-*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Spring emerges, chickadees out my window; snow-covered roofs. spring by the window winter on the roof i wait,times moves |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
so nice to read you again |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...so good to read you again. Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
choshi Well done enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
fine enough for a series of greeting cards |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
choshi -- I love this series! Exquisite and uplifting! ......jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
snow on windowsill still the morning springs anew beams of light beckon guess you can tell I enjoyed this inspiring set |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paul~ These are so genuinely lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you everyone for your encouragement, kindness and warmth..... ~P |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Well done...thanks for posting these. INclan |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Great excitement in such few words. Most excellent poetry! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
snow on windowsill still the morning springs anew beams of light beckon guess you can tell I enjoyed this inspiring set..... Oh yes, and I see you enjoy writing haiku as well... ~P |
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