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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Me you saw my generosity as weakness for I was willing to share but not give away my life I did that before to only become a stranger to myself and that clearly is a mistake I’ll not make again and if there is a sacrifice to be made it won’t be me "i wish your room had room for two" John Mayer |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A good poem...showing determination and resolve...well done Helen... Thank you.... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"A mistake I'll not make again" Very strong and powerful poem. This really lets your confidence and ability shine through. I enjoyed this a lot. .:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':. Thankyou! ^*-Kimberley-*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
please rmemeber your beautiful words, a gift for your own self's heart |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
As time flows by you get stronger. Nice! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 You go! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Helen!! Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Strong and positive. Enjoyed your words. Maree  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
It sounds like you and I have gone through the same thing. I feel the same as you do. Just take care of number one. You! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome!! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
strength is beautiful |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Nor should you, Helen! Enjoyed.  .....jo |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is great !!!! So sad that I can relate...... : ) Good to read your work... Connie |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
So very true. Been there myself and you put it to words well. |
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loner187 Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 106Upstate New York |
you gotta stay strong and remember the most improtant thing, yourself. thanx! "Love doesn't make the world go 'round. Love is what makes the ride worthwhile." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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