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wishing the whiles |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I weren't alone right now. these silences spoke breath. a zipperpull built here in my chest so I could keep me from the cold regret of turning inself-out... I wouldn't think so loud. I had no wish. . .at all. I weren't alone right now. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
turning inself-out... perfectly, achingly described you have lots of wishes left and the right ones for you are going to come true ~K~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Serenity, you are not alone in your wishing. Sometimes one can feel lonely even when there is a full house. I liked that stanza about the zipper pull a lot!  .........jo |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Serenity Blaze, "I wish I wouldn't think so loud". I am glad I hear your thinking... My grandmother (would be 104 if living) used to have a saying that always left me perplexed: "If wishes were horses, beggars would ride." Have you ever heard that one? I, too, liked the zipper part! Sadie |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you could never run out of wishes, just keep taking them one at a time, give them a purpose to exist....because you have a purpose to exist..and alone is not as alone as it may appear...  unique twist on something we all share  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
if you're out, you can have some of mine  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sometimes it can really be that heavy and I appreciate the feeling you've generated in this piece. I like that, "inself out," good phrase....... Eric |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good write karen i hope you still have a wish left, i think we all have a wish left to be filled, so if you find out how let me know. bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Always. K |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I wish these silences spoke breath. I wish I had a zipperpull built here in my chest ================== oh Sen ... ... ... ... ... *sigh* Home is a feeling I buried in you ... I'm alright, I'm alright ... It only hurts when I breathe ... M.E. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You have many more wishes left Karen...many more  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"I wish I weren't alone right now." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, I think wishes are nutritious. LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Of course you have many wishes left! Love ya lady~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiles...thanks again for reading. I was trying to keep it simple for once.  Hope ya'll enjoyed. thank you |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh... gawd how I know...and feel this... Hugs, you... love you... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed   |
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