Firestone Tire (twenty words or less)

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Open Poetry #31

Firestone Tire (twenty words or less)

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

0 posted 2004-03-27 12:02 PM

  I, the Firestone Tire,
  Creativity the leaking air;
  Against jerking friction,
  We're trying to hold the road.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-03-27 12:05 PM

I get it! Good write!

aujussy wolf

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since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

2 posted 2004-03-27 12:12 PM

i read a few times , and the result was cool poem sade ...your the creative one ,

-wolfy

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JDW III

EternitysHorizon
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 145
Twilight's Orchestra

3 posted 2004-03-27 12:21 PM

As we all are
slowly deflating
grasping at pavement
only to avoid yet another ditch

"High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy."

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2004-03-27 03:48 AM

That's what happens when two giants become joined by marriage. Production occurs too fast and expansion is too quick.......Firestone is accountable and I like the way you put this in a poem.

Eric

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-03-27 03:50 AM

just trying to hold the road....yeah

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

6 posted 2004-03-27 03:57 AM

and ditto Dixie as well

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