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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2004-03-26 11:51 PM

Feelings Flow To My Pen

Emotions making entries
Flowing across each line
As words tumble in place
Inner me forms into rhyme

Emotional balancing acts
On every turn of the page
In writing of love and loss
All worded stage by stage

Emotional mixture written
A blend of highs and lows
Words flow dark and light
My inner feelings disclose

Emotions always emerge
Feelings of a varying kind
So its with words I choose
By versing heart and mind

Emotions of circumstance
Of why's, where and when
Input and output continues
As feelings flow to my pen

Hope©2004

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-03-27 12:36 PM

Such a beautiful write, Hope, one of my favorites now of you!

.....jo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-03-27 04:05 AM

we are very emotional, aren't we?

great write!

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2004-03-27 09:55 AM

Thank you iliana for such a wonderful compliment ... poetry as helped me come out of my shell for better or worse many times thankfully

Hope

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2004-03-27 09:58 AM

Thank dixie , yes I am an emotional being indeed .... actually my heart and mind were feeling quite numbed because of certain situations ... but hey I had to explain my emotions somehow and besides I don't know how but suddenly I passed 2,000 , it seems I have been here for ages

Hope

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2004-04-04 09:43 PM

Hi Hope, I really like this.
This is how I feel, too. I'm
not very good at hiding my feelings.
Hugs,
Ethel

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2004-04-05 12:16 PM

Thank you Ethel , I used to hide so much that was until I began writing
Hope

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2004-04-05 08:53 AM

Hope~
I've always enjoyed reading your thoughts~
No exception here .... this is wonderful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

8 posted 2004-04-07 11:24 PM

Hope,
I enjoyed this very much. It is well written with a very pleasant flow and a message I understand-the balancing act.
Sadie

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