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steavenr
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0 posted 2004-03-05 12:54 PM



unsung floes in
flight of sudden care-age rides,
chains of life’s intransient streams,
distance broached by time’s inerrant schemes,
dispel the quietude of solitude
melting, melding, molting, molding
changing static rites of passing dreams



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-03-05 01:37 PM



I found me a

Grover
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2 posted 2004-03-22 01:07 PM


Very nice!
SimplyGold
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3 posted 2004-03-27 07:35 PM


Enjoyed this. Glad I found it.


SG

Sadelite
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4 posted 2004-04-07 11:48 PM


I read this one four times, each time seeing more brilliance in this.  Static rites, a great title for a great piece.
             Sadie

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