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Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

0 posted 2004-03-26 05:05 PM

Salt and wet trickle
Down crevices, over obstacles
Waves bring the droplets to the shore
And it continues on
Bearing its offering of sadness
Bringing with it the grit of mascara,

Dripping
Onto my page

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

1 posted 2004-03-26 05:12 PM

Fabulous and geez, can I relate to this!!

Anytime you want to have a 'pitty-party', email me and I'll gladly join you!!

Hugs, Marti

I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel
more like I transcribe them. It's just a matter of listening.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-03-26 05:15 PM

Have a good night

Dave

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-03-26 05:35 PM

tough days seem to be in abundance, but its nice to have so many to share the load...

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

4 posted 2004-03-26 05:36 PM

Thanks everyone...I appreciate the encouragement...I knew I'd feel better unload here...the good thing is, tomorrow will come and today will be done

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2004-03-26 06:54 PM

Hope tommorrow gets better for you.....A very vivid description this.......Love the images.

Eric

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-03-26 07:40 PM

I hope tomorrow is a better day for you.
Enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace ~

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

7 posted 2004-03-26 07:55 PM

Thank you both - I'm sure it will

loner187
Member

since 2004-03-21

Posts 106
Upstate New York

8 posted 2004-03-26 07:59 PM

i hope tomorrow's a lot better for you. i can totally relate to this poem, in fact i had a pretty bad day a couple of days ago. evryone has to have a couple; that's why we all call life hard! thanks for a great poem.

-Amanda

"Love doesn't make the world go 'round. Love is what makes the ride worthwhile."
-Franklin P. Jones

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

9 posted 2004-03-26 08:03 PM

You really reeled me in with this.  I could see the blotching mascara.  I hope tomorrows are better, Copperbell.  Your poem was short, but every word was so well chosen to
paint mood.
             Sadie

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

10 posted 2004-03-26 11:16 PM

Thank you Amanda and Sadie - I appreciate your words.

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