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SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

0 posted 2004-03-26 03:24 PM

Well Excuse Me!

Stepped on your toes
  and just didn't know
Gave me an earful
  didn't know why
where did this come from
  right out of the sky

Maybe there is something
  with you going on
I got in the way
  and you got turned on
Oh my, I am sorry
  I know not what I do
I was minding my business
  and tying my shoe
When you came along
  and without looking down
walked into my back
  and yelled with a frown

Yes, my back is now aching
  and I'm far more worse
I didn't scream
  or at you did I curse
You were the one that didn't
  look down
I was the one you laid out
  on the ground
So, how can it be that
  I am the cause
When you were the one that
  neglected to pause
No, I am not angry or as
  unpleasant as you
So, please let me finish
  I'm just tying my shoe

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-03-26 03:27 PM

Love it

Dave

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

2 posted 2004-03-26 03:32 PM

And you better not step on me again either!!!.....nice vent, nice write...

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-03-26 03:44 PM

Very good!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-03-26 05:57 PM

SimplyGold~
Positively adorable~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2004-03-26 06:36 PM

Love the satirical movement in this....Good work!

Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-03-27 04:27 AM

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-03-27 04:34 AM

I echo all the above on this one!

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

8 posted 2004-03-27 07:54 AM

I fear that we all
have felt this way before.

.:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':.

I really loved the sattire
This made me chuckle.

.:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':.

Quite right for you
to feel so alarmed.
After all..
you were just tying your shoe!!

.:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':.

Wonderful

^*-Kimberley-*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

9 posted 2004-03-27 07:29 PM

Thank you Toerag,Dave, Marge, Eric,Passing Shadows, iiana and Kim.

I regard your comments highly and appreciate it very much.
Thanks for taking the time to read and respond.

SG

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