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MGROVES
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0 posted 2004-03-24 04:35 PM




God
please help me here
becoming the person i am
not one from their fear
help me
help others
not to feel alone
give them shelter
a place to call home
stop the abuse
end their lies
tech them real love
break the bad ties
i make a promise
to you
only good from me
pass the love from you
no more will go hungry
or feel the cold
your goodness will spread
my soul won't be sold
i'll bless you forever
and never doubt you exsist
God
pleade help me
to help others
to exist


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ethome
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1 posted 2004-03-24 05:37 PM


A beautifully put unselfish plea!

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

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2 posted 2004-03-24 05:41 PM


help them to help themselves

dave

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3 posted 2004-03-24 05:49 PM


thats the only way to help others is to help them to help themselves. not just hand out so they can eat, give them the tools o grow their own, not just hand out a place to live, give them the tools to build their own, give independence not dependence thank you so much for reply


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4 posted 2004-03-26 09:21 PM


Selfless. Godly and inspired!
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5 posted 2004-03-27 01:25 PM


give a man a fish, he eats for a day

teach him to fish, he eats for life

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6 posted 2004-03-27 02:31 PM


A lovely, lovely poetic lesson~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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7 posted 2004-03-27 07:39 PM


thank you all from my heart and soul for your replies
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