Majic ideas when you have got it wrong

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Open Poetry #31

Majic ideas when you have got it wrong

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-03-26 01:43 PM

Gentle lift
Changing your spirit
Eyes black
Saying I dont want my song, sung
I dont want you to make my destiny

Later we spoke

You did this to me
I was happy
You did this to me

No I have never done anything

I have stayed away

I have never done more to stand from a distance and watch

I have never made you be more than you

What happens now

Nothing

I had no involvement in you

I have merely stayed

For something

You can see the sun
You can walk down a hill
You can

It is easy to ask me
Why I permitted you

Looking into eyes

I will bear the cost
For I can not say no

Ask me

For the grant to ease a pain
I can never bear

and will someday face

dave

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-03-26 01:48 PM

Bravo!
The gate is open poet.
TD

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2004-03-26 02:23 PM

excellant!

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-03-26 03:09 PM

Enjoyed this great write, Dave. You've a way with words!

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-03-26 09:50 PM

the sun boucnes on the sea
very perceptive here

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