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Open Poetry #31

Utopian Unity

sea_of_okc
Senior Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

0 posted 2004-03-26 12:23 PM

An impetuous youth I often did say
I would search for a perfect soul mate
I wouldn't lose hope though day by day
It seemed I was avoided by fate
So many years were passing me by
So close was relentless despair
Just as I cursed, asking God why
Out of nowhere you promptly appear
Unlike any woman I ever have met
With a heart and a soul so true
And though we may not be married yet
I will make such sweet love to you
Some might say that this is a sin
But in truth have you made me whole
I feel if I could just breathe you in
And make you a part of my soul
I will have attained my life-long dream
Of achieving supreme unity
Completely enmeshed so it will seem
Our existence becomes only "we"...

Steven Seaman

You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back.
--Barbara DeAngelis

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-03-26 12:27 PM

beautiful

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-03-26 12:28 PM

nicely written...love the rhyme sheme (which is harder to do than most people know)

I'm happy that you've found what you've been needing in your life

seaslady
Junior Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 43

3 posted 2004-03-26 12:30 PM

wow... I felt your heart..

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

4 posted 2004-03-26 03:14 PM

Truly sincere, straight from your heart... may God bless your relationship!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-03-26 05:10 PM

very sweet

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