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Open Poetry #31

Gardening to Be

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2004-03-26 05:19 AM

Delicate daylilies lie dormant no longer
As each night shortens and days grow stronger

Tulip tips have touched the spring morning air
Awakening with the daffodils that are already there

Fallen fingers of the trees are gathered for the fire
With leaves and wind trash come joining winter’s Pyre

Gloom

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2004-03-26 06:17 AM

Not gloomy at all , Gloom...very nice in fact..
enjoyed
________ice
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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

2 posted 2004-03-26 06:52 AM

I do see some sun behind the gloom, there, Sir.

Thank you.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2004-03-26 07:55 AM

Professor Zoom (great rosie lens),
   I think you have have something here!
Sspring fever!  Wonderful.  I love it when you write other than gloom.  I liked your careful, delicate alliteration and use of metaphor.  The imagery comes alive like the birds at 5:30a.m.   More, more.
   Have a good day, Zoom.
                Sadie

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2004-03-26 10:06 AM

Tulip tips have touched the spring morning air
Awakening with the daffodils that are already there

Very nice Prof. Enjoyed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-03-26 11:43 AM

this was a breath of spring, very much enjoyed.

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