Open Poetry #31 |
Seed's Creed |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seed’s Creed The writing said, ‘twas of leaves and petals, All things outward, And I said, What of the seed? Is that not where knowledge lay, Within, Centered, Independently reliant enough, to fall among The ruins of rock, What of the seed? ~*~ Days flew ~ the seed became Something else, Leaving this behind… ~ But, crack'd the seed for oils within And rub the rock for dust of red Then dip the quill within the womb And write me what'd be said That leaves on leaves the toil of soul Those words that trip a tongue's delight That, savored, last, into the night That, once held, is captured, in one's sight And in the light thus captured Within it's gracious gleam Is once again gone, as dust, So let me seed yet one more dream... ~*~ What will come from this Tiny brown round Of otherworldly times, Tracing roots of lineage, tracking ties that bind, Will it stand ’neath twilight skies, Or wither by harshest sun? Never fear, the oils will hold To write again, To write again. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Recently I planted a peach seed in the ground at Bayfront Park in Miami. I wonder if its going to grow or not. Frankly, I doubt it, since the peach seed may require the nourishment of the fruit itself, but hell, i'm not botanist. Hell of a thought, sunshine. Had to read it a few times... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Karilea Such poetry, form and content, makes my spirit rise.. Thank you for this one, it did exactly that...You have captured a part of nature, tiny as it may be... a seed holds the energy of what has been and what can be...I love the end lines of this poem. enjoyed _______ice ><> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
My kind of oil! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sunshine, This is so eloquent and reflective. I may be back later in the week-I think understood most, butwas puzzled by some. You are a much deeper thinker than I. Sadie |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
First the shoots and tiny roots then leaves slowly slowly evolving Sun fed hunger raises stalks to warming blooms asudden burst of self becoming I knowledge aware self beyond till glamour falls petals to the ground only then does the realization truly come to being my purpose more than color glory to leave a new yet recognized more lovely flowering in seeds comes final knowing "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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