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Letting
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Letting |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Letting With the mind of an artist And the soul of a saint I read me her words And was brought to faint. They swept o’er my soul In whispers of night And danced in the colors Of a prism of light She says she’s a moth That flies round my flame But her arrow flies deep With a heart for her aim And I am transfixed In dimensions unknown The shaft of an arrow Has gone to the bone. Alas poor Sy, I know him well Now Stays stasis twixt heaven and hell |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Love's arrow tracks true Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! Remember, moths are attracted to flame ~ and may yours burn forever brightly with glorious light!  Light attracts light! Springtime hugs, EA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She says she’s a moth That flies round my flame But her arrow flies deep With a heart for her aim ~*~ Poetry's blue passions is surely a plus when such a little moth makes such a great fuss...   |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sy, I enjoyed your encompassing title and beautifully written poem. Have a great day. Sadie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent morning write Sy! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My dear sweet Sy ... you put a smile on my face and a sigh in my heart with this.  I got such a kick out of your "faint" reply to my poem... and I got news for ya Sy-babes...you've shot some heart darts of your own. *S* And? you bet your bow and arrow...Randy is a pretty blue flame who knows the name of the game.  *ww* love you Sy-guy    |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
G'mornin' Sy Have to chuckle that one particular "moth" was drawn to the flicker of this. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You know what they say of Heaven and Hell ... choose well where to dwell and we'll live to tell. Randy can handle the heat of Hell's fire ... for all he desires in his dragon entire. And you? You are a slice of Heaven on Earth ... you, who took a moth and gave her butterfly worth. *winkiewinkie* (rhymes on the run) lol |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nicely done dear Seymour. Enjoyed. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio That is true my fiend. Earth Angel Just love springtime hugs. hugs back. Sunshine You are a bright light. Sadelite And the top of the morning to you my dear. Nancy, Thank you dear, hugs back. JM, Your answer was a delight, but than again you are a delight. WWRS wranx A flicker is all I ask. LOL Chris, You are a joy, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sending kisses and great big hugs...hiya Sy and good morning to ya...cute write, as always very much enjoyed. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ And that is a joy to me. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana, Thank you my dear. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
if there was ever a day that you didn't write, I'd be worried |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, If there was ever a day you didn't reply, I'd be worried. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sy, one of my favorites of yours! Really liked it! ........jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you sweet. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Seymour, this was very much enjoyed my friend, thank you for sharing it with me. Sincerely Rick |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick Thank you for the read and reply. |
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