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Surrender's VIctory
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Surrender's VIctory |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
Amidst the sea of shadows terror runs as hope amok By the fire that God designed to life lend the legends of dark and light Breath to the EarthEmbryo potential should you cease your ceaseless struggle encasing defined fear and faiths unwavering duel lent onward temptations song ceaseless path choose hold fast midst waves spouting mist reeling never only slamming hull to water grasping sails or oars a small thing in this battle of heart mind more yet war end mind fight no more rise only on tideswell Original title no Vctory- see Sadelite's insight below. "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." [This message has been edited by EternitysHorizon (03-25-2004 10:20 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
By the fire that God designed to life lend the legends of dark and light ~*~ and beetle's larvae quivers in shaking hull of center stage splendid will its colors be once it may self-engage comment, please, upon the fact that life is surely short still the beetle wings to life with nary a thought to abort. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Incredibly deep water here. I like how you didn't quite spell victory in the title. The victory sounds incomplete. Misspelling can be an incredible tool I feel, another clue. (Incidently, people here probably don't think I can spell satellite, my user name. I teach spelling to my children, but find misspelling can be cleverly enlightening in poetry. As always, your work intrigues me, as do Sunshine's perceptive poetic replies. Thank you for posting. I sense sadness. I hope you are well. Sadelite |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
Would we know darkness save for life herald beginnings without knowledge our own EarthPlain existence is ending dichotomy human be thy name 'midst solipsism, love, hope, cruelty and all that man has wrought creation striving against destruction we humans fall to dark reach to light you caught a clue for there never was nor will be internal victory marked by peace to love to give without the Honest I so sadly clearly lacking in society where people unbecome self striving to fit in with the crowd and simultaneously declare their individuality black garbed artists coffee house homes instead of canvas time writer eloquence lacking typing time self called musicians choosing guitars for their color not sound lacking scale and chord understanding thinking music consists only of "blazing guitar solos" all lost in symbolism somehow seeking celebrity each has forgotten the simple defintitions writers= people who write, artists draw sculpt paint, musicians play and play more there is no I for victory In a solid black wardrobe I wonder what such see when the mirror smiles back no doubt the IMAGE of... there is no I there hence no victory of self where all begins I wondered if everyone would just think that a typo Think I will see if I can change it, as it seems to have flown by. Not an easy poem anyway. But thanks for finding yet another key. "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
For Sunshine The Beetle questions not but accepting its mandibles segmented structure role to life as surely many roll through life Religious priests of science would call such activities instinct and seperate we sentient humans from all species though all claim their pets "Love Them" rare stated conundrum the religion of science ignores but the sound of the words invokes the struggle within to lean towards light or fall to dark within a battleground too often unceasing lacking the breath of a true HeartSong "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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