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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

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0 posted 2004-03-25 12:26 PM

carcassed memories like page-frozen petals
dipped in serendipitous mind-clouds
that clothe the visage in cumbersome robes of doubt,
engaging dream-caught crevasses of day-tranced daze.

sight-creased folds of mental imagery mingle their circuits,
cold-fused lapses to transcend the thoughts,
loosing the mind from bonds of musing, flooding the fallow fields
of gratuitous fantasy, cleansing the palate of reverie

and healing morose decay
quickening the memory

to reminisce, yet again

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-03-25 12:44 PM

Steavenr -- one of the best poems I have ever read about the memory process!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-03-25 03:18 AM

yes! great piece!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-03-27 01:28 AM

Encore!

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

4 posted 2004-03-27 02:15 AM

carcassed memories like page-frozen petals
dipped in serendipitous mind-clouds
that clothe the visage in cumbersome robes of doubt,
engaging dream-caught crevasses of day-tranced daze.

A marvelous beginning to a great poem.
You've covered the memory process well.
Sadie

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-03-27 04:07 AM

jammed-packed with imagery, just like memories and the mind

enjoyed

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