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Beautiful Evening
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Beautiful Evening |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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The sun slowly goes down Behind the trees With leaves of spring green The clouds turn into Perfect colors of Orange, Pink and red As the sun disappears The moon appears over head And the sounds of crickets Make this beautiful evening Just perfect Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
You transported me through your poem. Yes. The crickets sing the evening song beautifully. Nice job! Sadie |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Sounds like an evening with you Julie.   What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
super images in this poem  i enjoyed it fully wolfy |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Perfect serenity. Love, Margherita |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Super nice... great images, enjoyed! |
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