Open Poetry #31 |
Dream Dancing: The Masquerade (Duet with Dixie) |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
In our mind's eye we fear nothing at all but hidden thoughts spy like a masquerade ball a dream dancing nearby awaiting our fall ... across the miles, touch step lightly, sway distance decreased a voice heard today ... a dream dancing nearby sweet music in play behind each mask of feather and lace, hypnotic eyes an endless face ... a dream dancing nearby the music quickens its pace all chandeliers dim smoky mist appears, sashay across the floor a burning desire sears to touch the dream dancing within music of the spheres it is hard to resist the movement in the air but to exist, our masks we must unbare ... at the dream's insist end this masquerade, if we dare (thanks for the dance Dixie) *S One's outlook can be another's expression. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO!!!! OK, so now do we need a Passion's dance card list? I enjoyed this duet very much. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You dance sooo well together! You didn't miss a step or a beat! A very enjoyable reading experience! Thank you, duo! Love & trip the light fantastic, EA |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
A waltz of passionate words!!!! Great job!!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
and the lines danced down the page....excellent duet! Brava you two!!! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
a beautiful dance put to beautiful music! Well done you two! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This was indeed a very nice dance to watch. Thank you. "toss me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
wonderful you two! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
twas my pleasure |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
What a fabulous duet !!! dance of delight and with equally wonderful words you write Hope |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
thank you everyone ... .... and to Dixie whom overcame my two left feet, a bouquet of smiles!!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my!! Lookie here....what a lovely!! Please du-et again soon. Hugs to you both~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Great duet, you two! ....jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"across the miles, touch step lightly, sway distance decreased a voice heard today ... a dream dancing nearby sweet music in play" I enjoyed this one so much, I decided to dance with you two again tonight! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
thank you ladies ... ... and KC, that would be the attractive touch of our favorite shadow under the dim chandeliers. perhaps a Part II might emerge. thanks again, everyone |
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