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A Night like none Before
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A Night like none Before |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Night Like None Before It was a night like none before With dark and cold beyond the door And burning wood threw firelight Like phantoms dancing in the night It seemed to me a sound knocked ask That took my weary bones to task But no one answered to my call Just whispers of the wind was all I turned my sight upon the flame Thinking out her lovely name To come and take my hand in thaw If but in spirit held once more It’s then a presence filed the room Like a gush that ran a flume It washed me like a baths release Bringing me a sighs surcease And from my heart a flame did swell That cried the name of Isabel |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are the loveliest knight of poetry ever... Isabel.... gawd sy!  here? and this? "It seemed to me a sound knocked ask That took my weary bones to task" to this? "I turned my sight upon the flame Thinking out her lovely name To come and take my hand in thaw If but in spirit held once more" SMILE. Isabel!!! aw sweetie... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, I surrender to your serenity. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
well done sigh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Thank you my friend. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i feel the wind sourrounding thee and the warmth of thy flames but tis it not the soul thee seeks thy spirit must be free thy soul is gods domain |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES, Amen, good reply. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T. ! This lovely poem for your beloved Isabel, is so stirring, so romantic, so syful... ~ May the winds in your lives forever blow gently and carry your names on high.  Sending a great big angel hug to embrace you both! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Never pass up an Angel hug. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She's one supremely fortunate being... having you in her life. You open hearts that all are seeing, the blessings of your lovely wife...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine   |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you bring tears to my eyes, this is beautiful |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
muted Thank you so much. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, Seymour a lovely read to end my day with. Beautiful. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you dear. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, Sey, this was lovely! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
loved this...very touching |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana, Thank you sweet. passing, Thank you dear. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THis is so tender and touching. And she will always be there for you beautiful poetry Take care Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done indeed Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana That tells me allot, thank you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello sweet Seymour...  this is so sweet and loving....... It’s then a presence filed the room Like a gush that ran a flume It washed me like a baths release Bringing me a sighs surcease And from my heart a flame did swell That cried the name of Isabel It shows your heart, my friend.  I've missed you. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel And I have missed you. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Sy! How lovely this poetic thought! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very lovely! *S* I hope you show this to her... she'll be delighted! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern She never reads my poetry. LOL |
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