Open Poetry #31 |
The Joining [a repost, in honor of special bondings...] |
Sunshine
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The Joining It’s a deep and residing Internal throbbing, When a poet is museless, No pondering, no wandering, a Quagmire of quandary, Where thoughts are amiss But rambling strife rampant, Knowing you want to go ~ somewhere ~ Not knowing where it might lead, Or even why one would take That road… Yet, that road is taken, In search of what’s missing inside, To where spirits are held Traveling in thoughts on tides Floating into the heart of dreams To rest in that special ~someplace~ Where a soul can find peace And even a muse can find sweet release... Perhaps it’s a ying and yang ideal Half of me in search of muse, Half of muse, in search Of me? Possibly, quite possibly… Does she follow in my footsteps, Or am I in search of her? Would he know me by my touch, Or does he rest, Quite assured, that I might stumble And in my plummet, Be lifted by my muse’s arms Ascend to highest summit… Reaching for a plateau Where poet and muse become As one, A subtle realization That this journey together Has just begun.... Oh, does she read my secret thoughts, Does he feel all that I hold inside? We shall walk this path together ~Searching~ Muse and poet... Side by side. Muse, my muse, abide with me, Step by step into destiny, Whether we walk, or fly, Shine, or cry, Muse, my muse, please, abide with me. ~*~ Gentle Spirit & Sunshine 04-28-03 |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
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I am honoured to have read this It is something that leaves a brain print with the words somehow hidden to appear Dave |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
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the ying and yang of me...outstanding write!!!! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
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Great write! I understand and enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
An exquisite blending of words~ ~Smiles & Hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifully written with a connection of lovely to lovely! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Perfect Pairing ! Hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
absolutely stunning! wow ladies! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
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Stunning!.. absolutely. Well Done both of you Maree Me thinks I shall keeps this one Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Sunshine
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A duet...even a year old...holds a lot of magic, my friends. Donna and I discussed this today; neither of us can remember what the other one wrote. To me? That is the highest compliment...that our thoughts/voices blend that well. Thank you, all of you, some of you for re-reading; some of you, for the first time. I love digging in the archives... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This speaks to me so clearly -- excellent write and so glad I got a chance to read it since I wasn't here last year. to you both |
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Brad_Smith Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 70Dallas, Texas |
Amen |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad you reposted |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
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A brilliant joint poem between you two....thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a lovely phrasing of that which we all seek, to have this rascal that moves us be available upon demand. Ken |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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I want to thank everyone for joining in the memory from last year and for leaving your thoughts and replies. Writing with Karilea is a gift, if you've ever the chance to do that you are in for a treat. Karilea, I am glad that this still touches you as much as it does me. Hugs, and again thank you for such a wonderful duet. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh SunshineyOne, I have missed you....... |
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