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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-03-23 12:40 PM

You ask me
to wait

how do i contain
the feeling that
seeps from within
as a budding rose
longs to redden the
winter worn trellis

how do i wait
while my heart
beats ecstatic
as the spinster
trees welcoming
the birth of
their newborn
greenery

how do i wait

when i know

the moment
is now

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-25-2004 06:56 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-03-23 12:44 PM

can't hold back mother nature!

when it's time to birth, it's time...no ifs, ands, or buts

beauty waits for no one!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2004-03-23 04:12 PM

Enjoyed your burgeoning spring. You sing acapella very well.

Springtime hugs,
EA

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-03-23 05:12 PM

Ink

The background

Supporting the front singer
Wondering why
It all blooms
Into a CD
When the front singer
Appears

To blend
Words
to

make that harmony

Davey

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-03-23 06:26 PM

When ya just can't wait because you see and feel everything is waiting to burst into bud around you..
You go it alone!!
Excellent write Michele..much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace ~

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

5 posted 2004-03-24 06:58 AM

the moment is always now.....lovely

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-03-24 01:39 PM

InkyOne~
I think the layering in this is creatively WONDERFUL~
:applause:
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2004-03-24 02:22 PM

Michele this is excellent.
Thoroughly enjoyed this read.
hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2004-03-24 02:51 PM

thanks kids for singing with me

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

9 posted 2004-03-25 06:52 AM

Needs to be bumped!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-03-25 12:49 PM

I agree

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

11 posted 2004-03-25 01:17 PM

enjoyed

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

12 posted 2004-03-25 01:30 PM

I enjoyed this so much that I had to come back for a second reading. Your imagery is very good.
Sadelite

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

13 posted 2004-03-25 02:02 PM

So very well done Michelle...
How indeed?
TD

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

14 posted 2004-03-25 04:39 PM

thanks again for stopping in, and for the second stop in for some... lol
always glad to see you fine poets

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

15 posted 2004-03-25 05:17 PM

I emailed ya gal....like your work....

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

16 posted 2004-03-25 07:00 PM

you don't seem the patient type...but I am sure what you wait for is worthwhile

M

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

17 posted 2004-03-26 01:43 AM

I feel your need to expand in this one. Beautifully done.

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