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Sweet Potatoes |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Distill tomorrow’s snow Placing it into a car seat Fastening its seat belt Plummeting over a cliff Pantomime jukeboxes With a grand magic wand Looking through the eyes of meanings First night of summer carries me Putting his arms around twig light’s Cotton night dress dreaming Physical pre-eminence without consequence Body language between nature and humans Expresses touch of harmony Essence of a loving Creation Humanity…all of nature Passing together Small words with many meanings At a stage with desire seeming Into woven forms Aspirations to forget with laughter by our sides Bringing home every gesture of tenderness Piercing my being, traveling out the other side Flowing with harmony as we fly With nightingales knowing the way Love sings green that savors folding lace Of hands praying like a Greek orthodox priest Woman to man, man to woman Spiritual consciousness Discovers authenticity In the equis of a shapeless seed Wearing children’s faces Crystals forms in our eyes Giving love spontaneous impulse Hitching on the wind of minds Eating form it voice clustered and heroic Pale quiet…beautiful and still Like a belief in God…waving…saying See you soon |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Lee, very nice...well crafted, theme rich |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And here I think you've made Virginia hungry... A very nice write, Lee...thank you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A very beautiful write LeeJ!  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Really enjoyed the read, my friend... jwesley |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Same title, nearly the same time...yet very different, most assuredly. Nice!!! Lee, some amazing lines. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Such depth in your poetry. A true artist, and philosopher. Great write Lee J. JL |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
You always emanate abundant talent and wisdom in your poetry. And this one is no exception! |
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