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Teacher's First-Day-Dress
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Teacher's First-Day-Dress |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
On the first day of school with parents at the door Young ones took their seats and sent parents In retreat to their cars and jobs Noticing and wondering. How could she dress that way? It was embarrassing to say the least. Upside downs should have be right side up; Fit could benefit by slight decrease. Why we wondered did she sew Novelty as such to know Imperfections? Sadelite (I hear she modeled and spoke of her dress To greet apprehensive, exploring youth To let them know that they were there In a place where in trying they might err.) |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Applause.. This is a delightful read... The teacher was a genius I love the word play and message in this part...excellent (I hear she modeled and spoke of her dress To greet apprehensive, exploring youth To let them know that they were there In a place where in trying they might err.) enjoyed muchly, _______ice ><> |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Examples...the best use of visual aid... Well done, Sadie! Do it again! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I loved it! Poetry can be born from the most unusual of occurrences! I also enjoyed the message inherent within! Hope you are keeping well, Dear Sadie! Love & healing hugs, EA |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sadie ... This is just outstanding!!!! Brava to you for the genius of this. Huggles, Marti |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sadie I loved the message in this...so cleverly told. Wonderful poetry! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Interesting lesson, for sure! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I thought she was a pretty smart cookie, too. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I too think that's just genius, sweet friend, I should try that sometime too, yay, call your congressman and demand "Inside-Out Day", yay! (does happy dance) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sadelite, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
ice, Thank you for your flattering comment. I'm glad you liked it. ~Sadie Sunshine, Yes, I agree that examples help create concrete pictures... Thanks for your challenge. I'll try. ~Sadie iliana, Amazing lessons we learn from just watching. Of course, you know that-it was you I watched among others. Hm... Did I learn a lot! ~Sadie Earth Angel, I agree poetry can come from the strangest things. Thanks for inquiring about my health. It's improving; I drove about ten miles today-still uncomfortable, but it felt great to get out for a few minutes. Thanks for your thoughtfulness. It is appreciated. ~Sadie~ Marti, Thank you for seeing the genius of the teacher! My children were very fortunate to have her before she retired. ~Sadie~ Martie, And I think yours are eloquently told! Thank you for your sweet comments. ~Sadie~ muted, Thanks for the responding icon. Cute litte guy! I'd like a 3-D action figure/copy of him to take to work. ~Sadie~ Noah, Now wouldn't an Inside-Out Day be a fun thing for everyone to do? Cute idea. |
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