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Open Poetry #31
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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
0 posted 2004-03-22 02:14 AM


confusion sets in
the fire of hell
invades my skin
the boiling bubbles
of my damnation is
here

i can feel it explode
into my fears my
my eyes are closed
the doors locked shut

i can feel this all rising in
me my spirts come apart
my heart breakes my body
grows numb

my time is shaking
and it wont give me
no harm just tourture
in solidtude

unedited version

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....
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EternitysHorizon
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since 2002-05-03
Posts 145
Twilight's Orchestra
1 posted 2004-03-22 02:28 AM

torture and solitude sound like more than enough harm to me

better days
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-03-22 03:40 AM

ouch
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