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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-03-22 01:08 AM



the greatest thing comes to me in my dreams
the smile on your face the touch of
your hand the inter peace you bring to me
you are the ideal man

the smell of your clothes the
twinkle in your eyes the laughter
that is contagious for hours.

my tears they cry your hand
touches my face i feel weak
the tenderness of your soul invades
me dearly

I enter with pure of heart and sound
mind i get my stuff together and
I make it work this time

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2004 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
EternitysHorizon
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since 2002-05-03
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Twilight's Orchestra
1 posted 2004-03-22 02:33 AM


Make it work- Good luck, hope you find what makes you smile.


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-03-22 03:12 AM


inspiring write
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
3 posted 2004-03-22 02:16 PM


ty
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2004-03-22 06:10 PM


Enjoyed...James
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