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Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

0 posted 2004-03-17 12:20 PM

ten past you and I
and we were almost
horizon spent

fading

with the glory
of a rumbling
desert storm

lying

in puddles
of cleansing
raindrop-drip

hushing

secret soul-spilled

       kiss

on lips that hold
the morning's dew

and you, who took
to evening's task
dipped past the

    non believer's moon

stitching

forever falling stars
into this lover's

   jaded eyes

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2004-03-17 12:36 PM

You two do wonderfully together!

I love this..so sensual and almost like a caress.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-03-17 01:39 PM

Brava! Awesome duet! Hugs to you both. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-03-17 03:54 PM

Very good!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-03-17 03:56 PM

Awesome write you two!
Please du-et again soon.
Hugs to you both.

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

~ Kahlil Gibran

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2004-03-17 04:57 PM

This is wonderful! Amazing how love can turn everything around.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2004-03-17 05:03 PM

Yes

I liked this very much

Dave

I can feel a desert of ice
Washing
Ideas
To feed

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

7 posted 2004-03-17 06:48 PM

Oh my goodness, you KNOW this is good...
very very much enjoyed

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

8 posted 2004-03-17 07:03 PM

thank you so much for the dance, biscuit. *smile*

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

9 posted 2004-03-17 11:21 PM

You two do beautifully together.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-03-18 04:19 AM

gawd! This is AWESOME!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

11 posted 2004-03-18 01:23 PM

Susan.... a caress.. that's a wonderful way of seeing this. thank you!!

Chris...hugs backatcha... thank you so much!!

Grover...:-) thank you!

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2004-03-22 10:06 AM

Another beautiful collaboration! *S* Excellent work with seamless flow! *S*

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

13 posted 2004-03-22 03:11 PM

Thank you all so much for the kind replies... snow is an awesome talent who has no trouble blending my awkward verses into a flowing masterpiece.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

14 posted 2004-03-22 06:22 PM

my thanks to everyone i missed before...

*you* my dear, biscuit... sell yourself short way too often.. awkward is not a word i would use for your verses.... (((hugs)))

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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