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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-03-21 10:57 PM



A vivid collection of me,
a contrasting reflection
of me,

Pieces stacked together,
one layered upon another,

Photographic memory,
stored in a minds
infinity,

Love holds them there,
until the day, the hour,
you no longer care,

Pieces of me you have,
the last important piece
is missing,

The puzzle incomplete,
most desired piece
your mind needs possesing,

A picture incomplete,
no you, without me,
love does compete,

The last piece,
now remains forever lost,

Inside the museum of your mind,
hangs pieces of me....

love was the cost,
heartbreak was its fee...

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2004-03-21 11:20 PM


I know how this feels. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-03-22 12:26 PM


a sad write
the incomplete puzzle always leaves you feeling a bit lost within that missing piece

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-03-22 03:39 AM


I know
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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4 posted 2004-03-22 04:40 AM


Sometimes having just a small shred of a piece of a person will have to suffice...but that shred is as gold....

Thank you...great poem....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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