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0 posted 2004-03-21 08:22 AM




photo titled: "The Golden Path" by~me
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a touch of inspiration came from reading Dixie's (passing shadows) poem "Our Fifteen minutes of fame"...thanks Dix

© Copyright 2004 Dawn van Krieken-Smith - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-21 08:43 AM


muted,
Beautiful picture and write. Enjoyed.

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2 posted 2004-03-21 09:36 AM


I loved the imagery
Very well written m'dear

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3 posted 2004-03-21 12:42 PM


WOW!!!  Dawn this is fantastic...
the words and the picture!
You are very handy with a camera as well as a pen I see.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

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4 posted 2004-03-21 12:55 PM


well...I am certainly touched in knowing that I have helped to inspire such a beautiful work...I am speechless.

a definite keeper...this has a home in my library!

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5 posted 2004-03-21 02:43 PM


What a wonderful gift you share with us.
TD

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6 posted 2004-03-21 03:16 PM


Very beautiful and very touching.
Love, Margherita

ice
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7 posted 2004-03-21 03:17 PM


The poem needs to be read slow and graceful, just as the title suggest...very nice, Dawn...Picture and poem go very well together
enjoyed
_______ice
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8 posted 2004-03-21 05:20 PM


Dawn, this is truly a keeper.
thankyou for this. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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9 posted 2004-03-21 05:32 PM


thank you everybody for your lovely comments

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10 posted 2004-03-21 06:22 PM


Dawn~
My GOD ... this is beautiful !!!!!
Another 'favorite' to add to the ever-growing library of YOU~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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11 posted 2004-03-21 07:46 PM


I'm at work now on a computer that has a big monitor and awesome picture quality...and I'm even more astounded looking at this again...

that is an awesome picture! and poem!

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12 posted 2004-03-21 07:57 PM



Searching the adagio...

lovely, lovely girl,
this is so very beautiful...

thank you.

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13 posted 2004-03-21 09:12 PM


Not only is the poem beautiful, but the title is beautiful as well.  You do titles so well, I'm jealous, I can never do them.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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14 posted 2004-03-21 09:27 PM


I admire good work in many forms, even if i don't fully understand what it all means :-)
and this one is definitly one i admire.
thank you for showing it to me.

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15 posted 2004-03-21 09:34 PM


...a really terrific write my friend.  Enjoyed every word several times...

jwesley

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16 posted 2004-03-21 09:39 PM


Oh Dawn, this is a brilliant show of shadows and song~

Absolutely stunning!!

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17 posted 2004-03-22 12:28 PM


wanted to say "thanks" to you all...
id really like to give everyone of you a kiss on the cheek for making such lovely comments..youve made my day

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