I am a very emotional person

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Open Poetry #31

I am a very emotional person

Babigurl2k23617
New Member

since 2004-03-21

Posts 5
Boston,Ma

0 posted 2004-03-21 10:51 AM

U NEVER LIKED ME

U told me u didnt
like me
Why?
U told me I was a mistake
U told me u cant stand me
U also said that u hated me
Why?
U told me that i hurt u
But u also hurt me 2
U also told me I wasnt suppose to
be on this earth
Why?
U say u love me
Do u mean it?
Didnt think so!
U said I wish u wasnt here, I cant stand u
It all hurts me
But ill remember that u
dont like me though
Its all good
I have people who care

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-03-21 12:16 PM

the last line should be the final comment to that person, then walk away and forget what they think

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-03-21 12:31 PM

I like it even if parts are in SMS

Dave

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-03-21 01:10 PM

sad write...

I know it's hard to forget, but you're better off just putting it behind you...

that is a sad person who would say things like that.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

4 posted 2004-03-21 06:34 PM

Keep writing, it'll help you grow stronger emotionally. It'll free you to love again.

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