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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-03-21 07:14 AM


A Mental Sea

While sailing on a mental sea
With fantasy ahead of me
I chanced upon an Isle of wile
A profile of smiles beguiles.

A world of mortal pleasantry
A portal to serenity
A castle keep that made me weep
A phantoms wallow in a sleep

In magic of a mystery
She opened up her arms to me
Cooed to me a golden dove
Touched me with her open love

Played upon my hearts adore
Showed me rainbows evermore
Placed a crown upon my head
I felt for sure that I was dead

This heaven that I knew would be
Was born this night a mental sea.



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2004-03-21 07:19 AM


*battin eyelashes*

A portal to serenity?

Gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

oh show me?

I think I may have forgotten the way m'self!



gawd I love seymour!

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2 posted 2004-03-21 07:42 AM


Ditto that it's perfect
for K...

Thank you Sy, for the

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-03-21 07:50 AM


serenity,
Bubble, bubble, boil and trouble
From the mixture comes your double.
She will know the way to glee
So let it be, so let it be.


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-03-21 07:57 AM


Sunshine
For you the answer lies in cool
Your thread is bound around a spool.
So cut the gragorian knot
And you will find your happy plot.

scorpio
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5 posted 2004-03-21 08:56 AM


A magical sail if ever there was.  I do enjoy your sailing adventures.  May your spinnaker gently luft, Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2004-03-21 09:00 AM


scorpio
I do thank you my friend.

Enchantress
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7 posted 2004-03-21 12:10 PM


Wonderful morning write Sy!
And, this is perfect for Serenity!
~Lunch time hugs & tea, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

sea_of_okc
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8 posted 2004-03-21 01:14 PM


May the wind be always at your back and the tide be high in every port...
Wonderful poem

Ericc
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9 posted 2004-03-21 02:33 PM


What a beautifuly lyrical poem!

Eric

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-03-21 03:05 PM


Nancy,
Tea will be fine, thank you.

sea_of_okc
Thank you my friend.

Ericc
Thank you for the read and reply.

Martie
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11 posted 2004-03-21 04:40 PM


Sy

You have the most beautiful ship around!!


passing shadows
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12 posted 2004-03-21 04:50 PM


nice write Sy

enjoyed the daily dose

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2004-03-21 05:16 PM


Martie
Thank you my sweet.

passing,
Then a toast to the daily dose.

Margherita
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14 posted 2004-03-21 06:13 PM


Played upon my hearts adore
Showed me rainbows evermore
Placed a crown upon my head
I felt for sure that I was dead


It's good to be alive and be shown rainbows, or better still ... riding them.

That's so lovely, dear Seymour!

Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2004-03-21 06:33 PM


Margherita
Only the lovely can see the lovely, thank you.

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