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Open Poetry #31

Granting Of The Sacrifice

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-03-21 10:05 AM

Granting Of The Sacrifice

I never
asked anything
of you
I was
trying to
give you
something

"i wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-03-21 12:40 PM

Sometimes they just don't get it do they?
Love ya pretty lady~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

~ Kahlil Gibran

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-03-21 12:49 PM

Maybe the surprise is to allow them to tell you what they would really want

but there is always a danger in that

Dave

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-03-21 12:51 PM

some people just don't see that, do they?

sea_of_okc
Senior Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

4 posted 2004-03-21 01:18 PM

Geez I get it

            I can never accept
                anything
                from you
              Unless you can
                take from
                  me too

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2004-03-21 02:33 PM

Powerful words.

Eric

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

6 posted 2004-03-21 03:16 PM

My Heart Asked For Something

. . . but only
the opportunity
to reply
"You're welcome"

e
(thanks for this inspiration, Helen)

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