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Aura Red |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Shale determination danced upon the wider view Speaking liquid to the unwound hands of wishful thinking Drop by drop, shook off the back of hounding memories Songs that peek beneath the corners of a secret place That latched beneath your fingers as meandered in my hair A touch upon my ear, in melody that could only be of you and me A glow that is forever outlined on my soul, thin and whispered Yet in the farthest echo of your voice, glows red your place within my heart Copyright Kkh 3/20/04 |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
A glow that is forever outlined on my soul, thin and whispered Yet in the farthest echo of your voice, glows red your place within my heart amazing within the deepest part of us, we can feel the echo even if slightly of that which left its glow on us |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Yet in the farthest echo of your voice, glows red your place within my heart yeah this line is super  luv it ....... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
"Songs that peek beneath the corners of a secret place" Yes. Several secret places. "A glow that is forever outlined on my soul, thin and whispered" Amazing, how that happens! I remember all of this. Thank you for reminding me. Those were good times that I had myself believing I had forgotten. This makes me smile. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I love the whole thing....how you ever pulled those words from within.... especially love this: "Drop by drop, shook off the back of hounding memories Songs that peek beneath the corners of a secret place" mm-hm ~K~ |
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Melodious_silence Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 37 |
I always believed, that a good poet could be detected when the audience is able to relate with what has been written. The imagery is spectacular. Thank you so much for sharing, I seriously enjoyed what you have given. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
TD -- Wonderful expression of a special feeling evoking priceless memory for me!  ........jo |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh, that last line...*sigh*...youve outdone yourself...very touching |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
TD Magic as usual Dave |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful!! Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You captivated magic here. Love, Margherita |
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