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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2004-03-20 02:11 AM



Note: This poem came from my feeling the pain of someone I know very well.

+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+

Turbulent winds swirl me about, higher and higher ~
Tossing me, whipping me further and further into the ethers.
Lost and alone, with no one to hear my cries,
I drift aimlessly through the void of space
~ endless, timeless space ~
And into the nothingness of no tomorrows.

+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+


© Copyright 2004 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
muted
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1 posted 2004-03-20 02:49 AM


that sort of pain, is a terrible one.. i hope whoever was feeling this, finds solace soon...
for you for being such an empathic friend

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-03-20 04:39 AM


I have to echo muted here
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3 posted 2004-03-20 04:57 AM


Pain expressed well..in such short amount of words....

Thank you EA...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-03-20 08:44 AM


Earth Angel,
So even Angels can get depressed.

scorpio
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5 posted 2004-03-20 09:03 AM


Intensely expressed emotions.  I hope that your friend has found comfort and support.  

believe in what your heart feels...

Margherita
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6 posted 2004-03-20 09:39 AM


Very deep, dear Linda, the pain is felt! When there is no hope left.
But even the pain passes and something new is born into the emptiness. May this be so.
Love and hugs. Margherita

Neeraja
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7 posted 2004-03-20 09:40 AM


I know excactly how this feels...

ethome
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8 posted 2004-03-20 09:47 AM


You really captured the pain with this.... Very well done!

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9 posted 2004-03-24 06:33 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Linda, this poem only shows even more you have one of the most compassionate and loving hearts of all and your angelic smile of comfort is bound to touch your friend's heart and bring comfort to the heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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10 posted 2004-03-24 06:37 PM


Oh, Earth Angel, big hugs sent your way to share with whoever else needs them.  
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11 posted 2004-03-24 07:52 PM


Without pain and sadness, we would not kno happiness as well as we do.

Great write!

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12 posted 2004-03-24 09:26 PM


muted ~

Yes, this person is feeling much better now. Just showing them how special they are and by lending a helping hand, has put the smile back on their face.

Love & Light,
EA

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13 posted 2004-03-24 09:28 PM


ps ~

Somtimes a simple display of empathy can help someone to turn a difficult corner in their life.  All they needed was some understanding.

Love & Light,
EA

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14 posted 2004-03-24 09:29 PM


Goldenrose ~

You are most welcome! ~ and thank YOU!

Love & Light,
EA

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15 posted 2004-03-24 09:31 PM


Mr. T. ~

No, my friend. It is not I who is depressed. Mind you, I can get a wee bit down at times ~ especially when I am feeling the pain of those I care about.


EA

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16 posted 2004-03-24 09:34 PM


scorpio ~

Yes, they are feeling much better now.

Love, Peace & Harmony,
EA

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17 posted 2004-03-24 09:35 PM


Margherita ~

What a beautifully expressed and poetic reply! Thank you!

Love & Light,
Linda

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18 posted 2004-03-24 09:37 PM


Neeraja ~

Well hello there, stranger! Good to see you again!


EA

Sorry to hear that you have known of such desperation.

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19 posted 2004-03-24 09:39 PM


Noah ~

YOU, my dear Angelic One, are the consumate, compassionate, and loving heart!

Loves 'n humongous hugs,
EA

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20 posted 2004-03-24 09:40 PM


iliana ~

I'll send your "big husgs" along ~ & keep one for myself for one of my rainy days!


EA

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21 posted 2004-03-24 09:41 PM


Kristabell ~

That is so true! We do appreciate the highs so much more after we have experienced the lows!


EA

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22 posted 2004-03-24 09:43 PM


ethome ~

Ooops! Sorry! I almost missed your thoughtful reply! Thank you!

Love & Light,
EA

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23 posted 2004-03-24 11:41 PM


You have such feeling and compassion in your writing.  It is always a joy to read whether happy or sad.  Excellent in my mind!
Earth Angel
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24 posted 2004-03-25 07:57 AM


Sadie ~

That was a very kind and generous thing for you to say! Thank you, my friend ~ and I hope you are feeling better!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

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