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Questioning Creation
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Questioning Creation |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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The science of our world has robbed my awe for heaven’s eyes. The stars have been reduced to balls of fire. Our fathers could find solace dreaming about what they saw but we defined when we should have admired. How young were you when reason stole the sun? When did the moon become a rock to conquer? I want my soul to dream of things to come but knowledge wont allow my heart to wander. Before we drowned our world in explanation Such hope there was in questioning creation. |
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MissRhyme New Member
since 2003-09-15
Posts 3Ajax, Ontario, CANADA |
I really like the message in this poem; it's very insightful. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Science tells us what,,,,why,,and how,,, Imagination tells us they are all wet,,,,,let your mind and heart soar the cosmose,,,,say hello to the man in the moon, and take him for a joyride to the next nebula Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hey Kevin I love the poem. Of course astronomy does hold some fascination for me. I had to stop in and see what the other Kevin was writing. Well done! Glad I got a chance to read this piece. EvocativeVerse2 a.k.a. Kevin Middleton Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Very good points in this, I like the way you put it all together. Good job. Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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