Open Poetry #31 |
Winter Winds Blow |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Winter Winds Blow ~*Marge Tindal*~ When cold the winter winds blow ‘cross the heart of a woman chilling her to the core she needs naught but your arms to hold her she asks for nothing more~ Her need pleads come in soft, soft summon No coverlet of downy adorn is needed to grace her only your arms to keep her warm~ Strong arms in wrap of tender rapture is all she begs to ward the chill knowing that arms of loving embrace remember her need for his warmth still~ ~Thisun is for a special 'other dude' … cause I said I would~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"Strong arms in wrap of tender rapture is all she begs to ward the chill knowing that arms of loving embrace remember her need for his warmth still~" this poem says it all, right there in his arms! *sigh*, ya makin' those memories rise up in me Marge! ...can i borrow that downy coverlet no one is using? you are beautiful as usual marge. ~Dawn |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marge, with this blizzard blowing in tonight.. I'm keeping this one handy to read over and over. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very beautiful... and how very true. *S* Excellent write, my friend! *S* |
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Mystic One Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 134 |
beautiful moments to remember, the winter winds blow magic into ones loving heart, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marge I couldn't agree more. There is nothing quite like snuggling up to the one you love in front of an open fire. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful, as always, Marge. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
You speaketh truths! Very lovely, Marge. Patricia |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
And this must be one "special dude" because this is my favorite poem of yours so far! Marge, how nice it is to finally see your picture. You have the most wonderful smile! It's so nice to read your poetry again! Take Care, Richy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! Lovely! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...Nothing better then the arms of someone loved to keep one warmed. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is just beautiful. Love ya, Betty |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Lovely, Marge! I heard on the weather channel earlier today that even parts of Florida are having winter weather...hope you're staying toasty! McLean |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Marge, As always, you impress. This was just wonderful to read. After reading this, I had to give my pregnant wife another hug just because I felt like you told me to through this impressive piece. Thanks for instructing me on something so simple in relationships. I had almost forgotten what a hug means and symbolizes. Garfield |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Now that was a poem to warm up by... and by the way, I love your new picture! Sherry |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: I loved the poem! It takes lots of snuggling to stay warm in my country, but that's not bad! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Having someone to hold you is awfully nice when it's as cold as it's been (we reached a high of 9 degrees so far today where I live). Great work, Marge! And your new pic looks very nice too! ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I forgot to click the library button... and this is definitely one I want to keep! *S* It's just as warm and loving as I remembered... *S* |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Marge you are a bank of passion. I love your work and always honored to read them!! Beautiful work Marge. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Soft, sweet...and, oh so, true! Thanks, Marge! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Marge everything you write about becomes beautiful! ~ARH love and hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks everyone ... some precious comments in here and I appreciate them ALL! RomanticHeart~ LOL ... well, apparently not everything ... but I try really hard to write the REAL ... whether it be feelings or people~ *Huglets* ALL~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Beautiful thoughts here Marge, and a perfect time to write of such wonderful things as I sit here, shivering at work... LOL Great writing here dear HugZ Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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