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Rant 2 from having to live with someone depressed
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Rant 2 from having to live with someone depressed |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Tell about the meaning Bullshit me on high Tell me your a manager Lie to me, I deny Tell you are thinking Tell me that you know Tell me your useless Tell me you have to go What do I do What do I say I hate your guts Yet tell you to stay Tell me that your worth it Tell why o why Tell so I can understand Tell me before goodbye Tell me how it was Tell me how it will be Tell me something just lies Just help me to feel free I'v got to live for life I got to have some thing Just tell that it's over But my heart wont spring I cant bear to lose you Living with you a dream If there was someone else If somewhere else you'd been Tell there's a why Tell there's a sty Tell me that you love me Tell me by and by But you dont ever tell me You dont ever care You take me for granted You just drive me spare Tell me of my life Tell what it cares Tell me please, I need it Before I go somewhere |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
smack me spank me tell me you love me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad...I understand from both sides |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Dave The short lines fit the theme of the poem well, this subject is hard to write about Confusion, wanting to leave, wanting to stay and the feeling of co-dependence that accompanies this kind of situation is strongly felt....Good job ________ice ><> |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
^*-*^*-*^*-*^*-*^*-*^ This was a very intense tone but was written so well. I understand the co-dependence feeling all too well, I'm sure most people can identify with you on some level with this one. Good Job!! ^*Kimberley*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Dave, you've captured the full gambit of the emotions...anger, fear, distrust, confusion and despair...vividly. believe in what your heart feels... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
inkedgoddess Ink At that point I dont think the world or anything but letting go of emotion featured It must be held to live with someone who is just loosing it because they cant see a way out and attacks those because there is probably no way through the emotion apart from time. I wrote because it is easy to write I'm feeling bloody awlful, but no-one cares for the carer. passing shadows Yes it is sad for both sides, one experiencing the feelings and pain but inflicting the pain on someone else ice Thanks Ice - very true Kimberley Thanks scorpio Reason for writing it, is you always think it is only you and no-one else can know You dont realise you are not unique Thanks everyone Dave |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
 Good one! |
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