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Chameleon
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Chameleon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Chameleon The chameleon of my mind Leaves no shadows behind It filters in osmotic trails Like the winds of travail Brewing, steeping weightless mass To catch the gullible admass To filter in the soft of green And subliminal in-between It drifts like echoes advertise Into the striates of unwise Sooths the hungers of the lust With the anti bodies of trust It agitates a false imprint Upon the optics of the squint And passes by with no imply With but the slightest of a sigh It is the wink that makes a link And bridges o’er the things we think. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Cool, Seymour... I thought... "To filter in the soft of green And subliminal in-between" that was my favorite part and your ending reminding me of Dr. Seuss, I guess because I just read the poem about him, and finally, since I have an eye appointment today, your one segment reminded me of that too.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! What a wonderful piece you have woven for us today. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, your words have me thinkin' again dear Seymour. Tis' a good thing! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy..."anti bodies of trust"....what a wonderful way to put it!!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Nice of you to notice.  Chris, You are a sweetheart. Nancy~ Be right there for tea.  Opeth Enjoyed your reply, thank you. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
To filter in the soft of green And subliminal in-between Stunning way to describe this, Sy. Sadie |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Morning huggums, Mr. T. ~ May I borrow your mind's chameleon sometime? I will lend you my halo in return! ~ Mind you, it keeps slipping off to the side!  Angel kisses, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadie, Thank you dear for the read and comment. Earth Angel Well to tell the truth I sometimes can't find my Chameleon. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I have a poem about chameleons tooooooooooooooooooo! I liked you poem. _Juju |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
those osmotic trails not known by another name or maybe they are ~ how I enjoyed this reading your rhyme and your wit but I always do Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It drifts like echoes advertise Into the striates of unwise Sooths the hungers of the lust With the anti bodies of trust It agitates a false imprint Upon the optics of the squint And passes by with no imply With but the slightest of a sigh It is the wink that makes a link And bridges o’er the things we think. ================================== Im smiling at your clever cool rhymes Sy-guy, ya got some real doozies in this gem.  And as for that closing couplet-- If its winkies you need...you know Im sending enough to link the muddy Miss to your sandy shores.  Tink Winks on the way ... some Randy smooches too.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Juju Thank you for the like. Interloper Thank you for the enjoy. JM, Happy to see your lovely comment. Been missing you allot. WWRS |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I missed this...very neat write always love the way you rhyme |
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