Open Poetry #31 |
pretty as a seagull |
noah j Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 82on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair |
my dear, you are as pretty as the seagull swooping-- fluidly, in perfect eternal symmetry-- in a downward arc, flown just right, so that it can send one more fish to its death. the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
noah j - h'mmmm, kinda got me with the ending... BC |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Jonathon Liverstone Seagull is one of my favourite books even after all these years I will have a read again tonight, if I can find it Yes nice one Dave |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i like the ending!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Quite an ending... I'm going to be looking for more of this twist. Well done, Sir. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Gotta eat...James |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh yeah, beautiful and free, and then there you are. I like the way you do this. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ahh...kool...loved the ending!! jwesley |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat ending |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, enjoyed this playful one. Gulls are so mischievous, just like your write! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
heh heh heh.... ~K~ |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Bump! liked this one bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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