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garysgirl
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0 posted 2004-03-17 01:41 PM



Photo by Ethel_GG

~*~
We live upon a cloud of love
And feel as if we float above
Flying free as a snow white dove
We live upon a cloud of love

This feeling here within our heart
We hope and pray will never part
Being unique from our very start
This feeling here within our heart

The love we have beyond compare
Is filled with tender loving care
With all our hearts ourselves we share
The love we have beyond compare

We live upon a cloud of love
And feel as if we float above
Flying free as a snow white dove
We live upon a cloud of love
~*~

Photo by Ethel_GG

© Copyright 2004 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-17 01:45 PM


Ah, Ethel.....I wondered if you would take your pretty phrase from the Lounge and turn it into one of your beautiful poems!
Beautiful, hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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2 posted 2004-03-17 01:46 PM


Oh so very beautiful Ethel..
and you are SO good with that camera!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

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3 posted 2004-03-17 03:14 PM


Reality does unfortunately tell that flying a 100 ton rock above the clouds requires a lot of faith.

Nice and very real

Dave

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4 posted 2004-03-17 03:46 PM


im floating with you here, very nicely done
Grover
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5 posted 2004-03-17 05:09 PM


A soothing melody... excellent, Ethel!
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6 posted 2004-03-17 06:46 PM


such a lovely lady...this is very nice
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7 posted 2004-03-17 07:15 PM


garysgirl - a most lovely cloud for sure...

BC

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8 posted 2004-03-17 11:10 PM


A very lovely poem about love and the grace of love. Very, very, nice. I love the aspect of clouds floating like love. Well-written poem, garysgirl.
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9 posted 2004-03-18 12:27 PM


I love this floating upon a cloud.
A very nice place to be.
You created it with your lovely words.
Love, Margherita

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10 posted 2004-03-18 01:03 PM


a very calming peaceful place
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11 posted 2004-03-18 07:08 PM


You write love here and very well - Paul
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12 posted 2004-03-22 06:36 PM


I have always enjoyed your writings... and this one is no exception. Very much enjoyed... beautiful.
-Rob

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13 posted 2004-03-22 07:29 PM


Yes, it is calming.  You and your poetry add so much.
                  Sadie

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14 posted 2004-03-23 12:03 PM


Ethel, this was my good night's read!  A nice way to close the evening and dream sweetly!     .........jo
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15 posted 2004-03-24 12:19 PM


Now I feel as though I am floating on a cloud! ~ Ooops! I am! lol

This was a lovely read ~ and I enjoyed the view!

Huggums,
Linda

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16 posted 2004-03-24 08:32 PM


Beautiful. That is the best word I can think of, and sometimes that is not even enough. Great write!!!
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