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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-03-17 08:59 AM

Why Try

I don't fly very free
in these moments of just me.
Half the time the rise is on the down.

No matter what the try
deep throated always comes the cry.
In never ending negatives, I drown.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2004-03-17 10:54 AM

N.T.
Whatever has caused this birth of Saturns child in your life, can be mended, not erased, but mended to the point of tolerance...This poem is short, but very powerful, although common (its theme)seems to run rampant in society..and in actuality, always has..The trick now is healing, and learning from this experience...Take care of your soul..good memories can do this...
as Thomas Moore suggests..perhaps apply these words to daydreams..

*"Oft, in the stilly night,
Ere slumber's chain has bound me,
Fond memory brings the light
Of other days around me;"

*(exert "Oft, in the stilly night"

I have rambled on too long...sorry
enjoyed reading this poem
_________ice
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Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

2 posted 2004-03-17 11:41 AM

A sad write M...but you tell it with style...hope things havea rainbow edge soon..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2004-03-17 01:43 PM

Cheer up Maureen. Spring is just around the corner.........what corner I do not know....but it will come. Smile sweet lady, life is too short. hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-03-17 03:20 PM

Why Try

I don't fly very free

Dancing around your mind

in these moments of just me.

Half the time the rise is on the down.

Kicking the sheets over the down
that pretends down is up
up is down

and freedom is being cold
on a warm bed

No matter what the try

screaming

deep throated always comes the cry.
In never ending negatives, I drown.

To underdown
***************************
Loved your words

Dave

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2004-03-17 03:53 PM

Very good!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-03-17 03:55 PM

Hugging you tight....
Yup, Spring is coming..
this snow has to melt soon.

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

~ Kahlil Gibran

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