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Open Poetry #31

just rambling about Brent

ShannonMarie
Member

since 2003-09-09

Posts 55
in a state of being

0 posted 2004-03-16 09:32 PM

This is just me voicing my love for my baby... I love you Brent... and hope you never read this.
He speaks to me in dreams
his voice is all I hear,
my heart beating faster now
just knowing he is near.

His love is my shadow
and never far behind,
follows me everywhere
and with me all the time.

I can not breath without him
for without him I am blind,
to live without his gentle touch
I would surely lose my mind.

His every touch makes me shiver
his kisses melt my spine,
in his eyes I see forever
I thank God that he is mine.

Some say it is a weakness
these feelings that I show,
but unless you ever been in love
my friends, you'll never know.

love like you will never be hurt

ShannonMarie
Member

since 2003-09-09

Posts 55
in a state of being

1 posted 2004-03-16 09:49 PM

hmmmm why is it that sometimes I can write my feelings, and other times I go numb and do not post anything for months??

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2004-03-16 10:48 PM

its beautiful, why would you never want him to read this? an out-pouring of heart...

~~**~~
Walking with bare feet
among a tapestry of words,
each woven thread, awakening the soul
~~**~~

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-03-18 06:53 PM

(Writer's block?) I agree, let him read it!

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