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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2004-03-16 12:56 PM

Life’s cherished moments don’t always rhyme
and the sky isn’t always sky blue, either.

Swooping birds of prey sometimes fly my way
and today is one of those days
when I seek a smaller,loftier branch
to perch upon and wait

for a four o’clock shifting wind
to carry me safely home.

Mud mixed with mundane thoughts,
moodiness layered over wet chilled
aching bones seeking warmth;
yes, another day in paradise lost
within the daily grind of survival.

But even this little songbird
believes
in tomorrow.

PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

1 posted 2004-03-16 01:09 PM

I liked this Midnitesun....and your replies as well. *S*

PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

2 posted 2004-03-16 01:51 PM

Oh! What a wonderful write!

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-03-16 02:55 PM

Heartfelt and appreciated by all who have to grind their way in to the morning and back to the evening

Very good

Dave

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

4 posted 2004-03-16 04:42 PM

Very, very good! Great big smile to you!

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-03-16 08:11 PM

the "hope" in this feels sooo good

Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25

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Where no tyranny is tolerable

6 posted 2004-03-16 09:08 PM

But Starlight
is always beside you in spirit,
in the clouds and in the mountains
In the ocean and in the sky
:---)

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-03-16 09:12 PM

Wonderful write Kacy...
and yes, afterall tomorrow is another day!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

~ Kahlil Gibran

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

8 posted 2004-03-17 05:02 AM

oooooo yes! a keeper!

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

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9 posted 2004-03-17 05:43 AM

ery good writing...enjoyed reading this...

Thank you...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

10 posted 2004-03-17 07:31 AM

Beautiful poem, dark at first, but the light of hope illumes in the end lines...
enjoyed
_________ice
><>

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

11 posted 2004-03-17 08:59 AM

"But even this little songbird
believes
in tomorrow."

Very nice lines...

Very cool write.

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

12 posted 2004-03-17 10:53 AM

thanking each of you for reading my mundane thoughts

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

13 posted 2004-03-17 07:11 PM

Midnitesun - it's always good to see what tommorrow will bring...

BC

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