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Lakeshore Imaginings |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Fish break surface...far out Drawing your eyes beyond the upper truth Everything was said and meant from streams to rivers Rocks and shivers...paths conjoined and visions blue And green the fringe of trees surrounding gold Quaking Aspen glory...lost in thought Jealous lovers in past illusions fraught And left within your arms, the ball The game and that certain silken jersey That became a mummy bag upon the banks Where morning is announced in Pileated views A shamrock in the snow, beyond the icebergs glow Pulling farther out the shore, Waiting there in hope of more And knowing all is well Copyright Kkh 3/16/04 |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
truly awesome diamond , this sparkles with a pure light , its goin in my library right now  later fello poet and michyganda....... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
All is well indeed .... your poem is quite a vision! Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
very peaceful, love the gentle rhyme within it and the visions described Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
great job much enjoyed |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A satisfying read... excellent work! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite Kathleen! Very very much enjoyed the read this snowy afternoon. Hugs~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It reminds me almost of a tribal rite, the tent away from everyone, flowers planted and a few other things Dave |
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